Confused ??
Thursday, July 31, 2008 by Sunrita
A says "Lead", B says "Follow".
Cadbury says "Relish", Bitter Gourd says "Swallow".
Whether to trust, whether to stiffen,
When to speak and when to listen ?
Sometime later, or, is it now ?
Not that I don't know, but, please tell me how.
I am neither a Saint, no, burglar also I am not.
That's the reason, I fall amongst the confused lot.
A says "Go", B says "Wait".
How do I know ? Is it really getting late ?
Is there a Tomorrow ? Is there a Today ?
Where is the Drop Of Golden Sun, where is the Ray?
A calls me Silly, B calls me cool !
To seek the sky from the terrace, do I need a stool ?
I am a tiny rivulet, on its journey to meet The Sea.
A says "Look in front", B says "Come with Me".
A says "Dont fall", B says "Rise and see",
"There is the new Sun, there is God and that is your Sea.
Still peeping through the keyhole of a glass door?
No, finally, I am not confused anymore !!!
Cadbury says "Relish", Bitter Gourd says "Swallow".
Whether to trust, whether to stiffen,
When to speak and when to listen ?
Sometime later, or, is it now ?
Not that I don't know, but, please tell me how.
I am neither a Saint, no, burglar also I am not.
That's the reason, I fall amongst the confused lot.
A says "Go", B says "Wait".
How do I know ? Is it really getting late ?
Is there a Tomorrow ? Is there a Today ?
Where is the Drop Of Golden Sun, where is the Ray?
A calls me Silly, B calls me cool !
To seek the sky from the terrace, do I need a stool ?
I am a tiny rivulet, on its journey to meet The Sea.
A says "Look in front", B says "Come with Me".
A says "Dont fall", B says "Rise and see",
"There is the new Sun, there is God and that is your Sea.
Still peeping through the keyhole of a glass door?
No, finally, I am not confused anymore !!!
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Doesn't really matter what all the world says... I tell ya, Just go ahead. My dear, remember - sky is the lowest limit!
It's an awesome post... a gorgeous start off. Keep it up!
Really a nice post... specially when it's first. But are you sure it's your own writing and not a copied one... Confused ?????
Ha ha ha
@ Arindam-da...Thank you for the first comment to this blog and also for all those encouraging words. Cheers! :)
@ Tanusri...He he...Thanks for the compliment! Thanks for even considering it to be, as Great as a Copy...I am Greatly Honoured :)
:)
i just started my own blog di...
n its gud 2 c ur frst 1 so nice...
i write poetries too...
maybe i'll post em..
hope u'll read em sumday
enjoy
Mighty Good! seriously, ami eto din ei post ta porini. Aj office e kono kaj nei, tai boshe boshe porchhilam...this is so good! must appreciate!
Very well written :) Nice flow of ideas. I am impressed :
KEEP THE GOOD WORK GOING.
REALLY LIKED THE CONCEPT OF USING U AND I.
GOT SO INSPIRED THAT USED IT IN ONE OF MY OWN POEMS, IN BENGALI THOUGH.
U CAN READ HERE.....http://worldinmyvision.blogspot.com/
ITS NAMED "AAMI AR TUMI".....
@Saikat: Thank you for the comments. I also visited your blog and tried to comment but something went wrong I guess because it wasn't visible after I checked it and I wasn't prompted about it being moderated either :(